Depression's Repression

by Gasttlee   Dec 13, 2006


Depression is sad
far from glad.

It's a stressful burden
leaving you uncertain.

You experience a pain
such as suffering in vain
or standing out in the rain
causing lots of strain.

It's a great sorrow
as no tomorrow.

It's unhappy
but no way sappy.

Your heart aches
as burnt steaks.

You drown in a pool
that's anything but cool.

You feel dead
with not enough said.

You sense doom
as you fall in gloom.

It's love lost
as hearts are tossed.

You feel alone
as a dead bone.

You're no fake,
but your mind's at stake
as a flattened cake.

Don't let depression break your heart
for there are ways you can make it part.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Hatori

    This poem was brilliantly writen! The last stanza:

    How do I know this to be true?
    Because everyday this is what I go through.

    Really added emotion to this poem. Your flow was great, and overall, I loved this poem ^_^

    Keep it up, 5/5

    With all due respect,
    Hatori

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    I like the last line its like a advice to the reader. and I love your poem :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Cindy

    I loved the last lineof this. You arenot alone their are alot of people who go through the same everyday. Keep writing it helps so much. Thinking of you and keeping you in my prayers. Cindy

  • 18 years ago

    by Calli

    Hey; i like this poem.
    depression is a horrible thing.
    yes, very true. and by the way,
    thanks-you for the comment on my poem.
    sorry if you always feel like that,
    in my poem. good writing. keep
    it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    5/5. great poem! I added u on ur msn email to my yahoo ( i have something that can add msn ppl onto my yahoo) Sometime we need to talk.

    Your writing is amazing! I feel the same. Great job. 5/5

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