This would be a better poem if you didn't rhyme so much but i liked it anyways!

I like it how it's in couplets. This should be under the definition of depression. Oh,..Thanks for the comment.

Wow mad poem keep it up
5/5

5/5. great poem! I added u on ur msn email to my yahoo ( i have something that can add msn ppl onto my yahoo) Sometime we need to talk.

Your writing is amazing! I feel the same. Great job. 5/5

Hey; i like this poem.
depression is a horrible thing.
yes, very true. and by the way,
thanks-you for the comment on my poem.
sorry if you always feel like that,
in my poem. good writing. keep
it up.

I loved the last lineof this. You arenot alone their are alot of people who go through the same everyday. Keep writing it helps so much. Thinking of you and keeping you in my prayers. Cindy

I like the last line its like a advice to the reader. and I love your poem :)

This poem was brilliantly writen! The last stanza:

How do I know this to be true?
Because everyday this is what I go through.

Really added emotion to this poem. Your flow was great, and overall, I loved this poem ^_^

Keep it up, 5/5

With all due respect,
Hatori