Wow.. this poem's strong..
-great structure
-un-wavering flow
-story-telling..

tell me.. what made you write this poem?

Thank you very much. I wrote this poem because I feel that people need to see how much their words hurt. They don't seem to realize that in just the words they say they can drive people to suicide. It happened to one of my friends and I felt I should just get the message out to people before it becomes a bigger issue. Suicide is becoming more of a threat everyday and the leading cause is the remarks from their peers. thank you once again for your comment.

~K3!$3Y~

Hey this is also a great poem and what you said at the end is so true. but if you want you should read my she thought her life was perfect..... poem i think its my best
~Linzii