"The girl on one can truly see" i think it should be "no" not "on" and the title doesnt make sense you cant have the "s" and the end of realizes and yeah this is the best one out of all your new poems.. i like it but selfish boy is just always gonna be my favorite! lol =)

Hey darl there was a lot of emotion in this poem very touching piece. good job expressing urself. thank u for the comment on my poem. meant alot xx

Awww..every word, every emotion in this poem..I can relate to. This was very well-written. And the flow was smooth. Great poem!

"So if you do not mind
Please stop being fake
Because my heart is fragile
And it's begun to break"

that stanza definitely sticks out from the rest! although, the entire poem was great! Very nice job!

x.xBrokenx.x

Another good one. I liked it alot however in a few spots it felt like some words could be re arranged but other than that it was awsome.

5/5
Condescending;Heart.