Comments : Message to the slow of Mind

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Again, it was amazing! =] It's unique, has a perfect flow, and such a wonderful vocabulary!

    Virtues are seen as an enigma
    It is decay that produces stigma
    Steadfastly take all God has to give
    Find the courage to go on to live

    ^ My favorite stanza. You ended this poem perfectly. To me, to have a great poem, you must have a wonderful ending and you certainly accomplished that in this poem.
    Great job! 5/5 Keep it up!

    Stephanie

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    Pretty big words in this poem, 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Your writing really makes one stop and think. Well done.