Wow. This was simply amazing! Never have I read a poem with such fine writing in it. Your choice of vocabulary was fantastic and the flow was perfect. Very nice topic to write about too.
I really liked the first stanza. It pulled me into the poem and it captivated my attention.
You're a wonderful poet, keep it up. Also, thx for the comment, as a writer it meant a lot to me. =] 5/5

Stephanie

Nicely written, keep it up, i give it a 5/5!!!

Poem was pretty well written, i really liked the last stanza

Oh my god... That was breathless written. That hit a little close to home being an ex- cutter and all. It was moving it made me cry. You have alot of talent. I love your work. Please don't stop writting. the world would be at a loss without your words. 5/5

I love it!!!! Manda