Taking Over Me

by Wasted Fake Smiles   Dec 13, 2006


Your breath, your smell, all taking over me.
I would give anything for you and me to be.
You might not know it, but I love you,
I'll hold you in my arms all night through.

I'd give up everything just to hold you again.
Or to even be able to call you my friend.
Anything, because baby, can't you see?
You seem to be taking over me.

Every night when I lay awake,
I think of you and my knees start to shake.
No one can decide of whom we dream,
And baby your in all of mine, or so it seems.

I'd give you anything I have to hold you,
Take me tonight, say this loneliness is through.
Please baby, can you really not see?
You seem to be taking over me.

~*Who Cares?*~
this is true..i love someone...i dun kno if he likes me...but i really care..and he's taking over my thoughts:)

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  • 17 years ago

    by disturbed one

    That was deep....lol inside joke...it was though...good luck btw

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Aww.. this is cute.. i love it!! spectacular write!

  • 17 years ago

    by ŘÅÇĦ♥

    Good luck with that someone. :] I really like this poem it wouldn't be my favorite by you because I'm not a big one on this topic. but it is very well written. Anddd Good job your the first one I have seen to use puncuation!

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    I love it!!! =D

    I can really really relate to it!
    It's exactly how i felt my first year of college when i first saw Marcus and look at us now =)
    This is my fave poem of yours
    Well done!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by sweetiepie18

    Well done yet another good un!