Superior Than A Love For A Girl

by Goran Rahim   Dec 13, 2006


When you said,
"No. I don't love you"
My soul wilted, and
My heart was wordless.
As there was a love
From my heart
The purest and endless.
Afterwards,
I got to know
Another universe.
The universe of poems and words.
Then I realized
There is a love
Superior than a love
For a girl.

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  • 16 years ago

    by xxxStarSxxx

    Awww. This is such a sad but positive and meaningful poem. I love it. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Taylor

    Startling and suprisingly dark.. in a cosmic kind of way. (perhaps because you mentioned a new universe in your poem..) It made me think that poetry was a place you could travel to for safe keeping.

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    Amen to that! beautiful again, what's new!? o yeah, and my two songs are both on the top rated poems, that's 4 poems i've had up there, 3 within the last week or two, so i feel like that's a great accomplishment. great job again, my god of course another 5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by jello

    Cute! i love it.
    good job

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Another great poem!
    Keep up the great work!
    Keep writing because you're talented at it! God Bless 5/5

    ~*Tay*~