Amazing. Simply Amazing! One thing that mainly sticks out to me is the vocabulary, it's wonderful. =] You had a very good flow to this one too. To me, this poem was unique you don't see it very often which makes it as excellent as it is! Wonderful job, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

Good poem michael, 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

Wow, just wow. I loved it. Your wording and the way this poem flowed was excellent. The structure was good, although I noticed you double spaced in the middle of the poem, not sure if you did that intentionally or not. Other than that it was a well thought out and well written poem. Great Job.

Peace, Joe

Wow this is really good. you did a wonderful job on writing it. the poem flowed so nicely together. great job on this! 5/5

~Kristina

Wow wondeful poem. Your words ring so true. Great job!

Good job once again!

Very well done. It is a pleasure reading your wrok.

Interesting, a 5 indeed