Family Photo

by Shae   Dec 13, 2006


I look over at the family photo.
Look at that perfect family,
they look so right together.
Those two little girls,
that aren't so little anymore.
Look at the parents,
aged by a few years.
Time has changed the family,
not in a good way,
but a bad.
How this happened I'll never know.
I turn to take one last look,
I finally notice that,
You're starting to slowly fade...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    Oh wow.
    this was amazing.
    the imagery & the wording! i felt as though the picture of the family was getting older in my mind as you described it.
    great write!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by robin milford

    Nice poem I enjoyed it unique

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    The emotion in the poem was electric! gee. whoa! i so loved it.

    5/5 and great work. david

  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    I really liked this poem. The emotian included in it was amazing. It was short but told a whole story. An excellent read! Keep up the great work, and thanks for your comment. xx

  • 17 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    I really liked this poem it was really good. In a short poem you got your meaning across and I like that. 5/5

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