This is a really good poem although its short 5/5 keep up the good work!
((Kelsey))

Wow,that was so good yet heart breaking..thanks for your comment on my poem...keep up the good work
auna

Very nice. This tells alot of everyday life and experiance, and experiancing the anguish of a family change.
Keep up the great work.
God Bless 5/5

~*Tay*~

I really liked this poem it was really good. In a short poem you got your meaning across and I like that. 5/5

I really liked this poem. The emotian included in it was amazing. It was short but told a whole story. An excellent read! Keep up the great work, and thanks for your comment. xx

The emotion in the poem was electric! gee. whoa! i so loved it.

5/5 and great work. david

Nice poem I enjoyed it unique

Oh wow.
this was amazing.
the imagery & the wording! i felt as though the picture of the family was getting older in my mind as you described it.
great write!
5/5