Wow I can really relate to this one specially the last lines. I love how you penned it a really true poem from a heart of a true person who has a pure love. I really love how you describe her eyes and face really awesome great piece again my twin Thanks for sharing your talent 5/5 how i wish i can vote higher

I can relate to this poem all to well, sometimes the things we think won't happen, happen in an instant, excellent job 5/5

Well it is still very good goran, very good flow, i love it, i give this poem a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

Truely a greatly written peice of poetry from a truely great poet. The flow was great. Although I felt the structure wasn't too good, perhaps breaking it up into stanzas would help. Once again great Job. Keep up the good work.

Peace, Joe

Great job again! I love all your work, whether old or new!

Hi
its a very good poem..with true feeling

That was beautiful! I loved it.
Your poems never fail to amaze me!
Great job! 5/5 God Bless.

~*tay*~

This is an awesome poem u should have psted it when u made it its awesome and thx for the comment and i think i fixed the mistake thx again and good job

keenan

Wonderful.
So many heartfelt emotions, though I have found that all your poems have very strong emotions in them. =]
Anyway, wonderful flow and great vocabulary.
And like she said, better late than never. =]
Great job, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

Awe, this is sad.

Alright i was bored, so i decided to read more of yours... god you were what, 17, when you wrote this?? and it's still absolutely beautiful! god write me a love poem!! lol, you're such an amazing writer, i love to read your work!

5/5, nothing more nothing less, just like always, never gonna change

YOU ARE REALLY GOOD MY INSPERATION LOL