Comments : Together We Stand (Rubiyat)

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This one just passed my senses by so easily....putting a smile on my face, very light and yet so meaningful...great write once again dear

    all the best and take care

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    That was beautiful i really liekd that poem and i always luv reading the different styles of poems. loved this one keep it up darl xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Jen

    Awww i liked that poem alot it was rather good woOp!
    and i now know loadsa different kinds of poems thanks to you, might have ago at em if i can get the inspiration lol
    5/5
    ~*~Jen~*~

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    Sweetie, this is yet another one of your truly amazing poems! & I just saw that you're engaged! Omg, I'm soo happy for you and I hope you guys have a long and happy life together! Sorry I didn't see it sooner!
    xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    I may try this kind of poem because it rhymes, and may be a little simpler than others I've tried. It has a nice flow to it.
    LOL One typo in this one...(don't hit me)...second stanza third line..."it" should be "it's". Just something I noticed.
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by masked_senses

    Nice work girl...really like it...5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by ABake

    This is beautiful..like all the other poems you write...
    well i like how you desribe what that type of poem is at the end!
    xoxo-am

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Very well said..amazing, great writer. keep it up cant wait to read more.

    lissa

  • 17 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    Absolutely stunning, such talent you posess in the realm of written words. Best wishes and blessed be. *5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Thankyou everyone.. i'm pretty much speechless at your lovely comments..
    Thankyou..

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    What can I say but wonderful! I think I need to learn more on poetry writing! I only know what I read and I like it! Excellent!

  • 17 years ago

    by melly

    I love it
    its so gorgeous
    i give it five stars

  • 17 years ago

    by john graver

    Another awesome poem.5/5