Wow, hit a nerve, thanks. x

WOW!!! that's a truly wonderful poem... Keep up the good work!!! It really touched me b/c I feel the sam way!

This poem is very well written. The emotions can truely be felt while reading it. Great job!

I liked all of this poem, except the last stanza, maybe it you tried changing the last two lines around it would work better. I loved the detail in this, and the way you made it seem glorious at first, and then showed what she was really doing.

Great work.

--steph