Comments : Living A Lie

  • 17 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    Wow.. this is how i feeel. it makes me really sad.. but ne ways htis is such a great poem. its so good. i lvoe how u wrote it. it all flowed so nicely. great job. keep on writing
    take care
    luve angie

  • Hey Beautiful poem, and so sad! the changes in flow was abit of-putting at times, but it was really good apart from that!
    Lov Mez

  • 17 years ago

    by Jelz;; Oh,KillMeFast

    5/5 ... definately! I love this poem is so deep and meaningful. Your and awesome writer, keep up the wonderful writing. You've got alot of talent.

    Jelz;; Oh,KillMeFast