We really do take everything we have for granted, it's just something we always do, but we have to realize that what we have is precious, excellent job 5/5

Your really right and a really wonderful person at that cause you can sit there and talk about life .... the real things in life. 5/5

Your really right and a really wonderful person at that cause you can sit there and talk about life .... the real things in life. 5/5

... i can really feel this poem .. and i love the way you worded every thing ... keep up the good job i am going to read and comment some more of yours expecting you will keep your statement and comment some of mine back ... thank you

I think that this is true in some cases. Yes, come people do cry over little things that they could fix in their life but there are others that are worse off like you said.

I really liked the meaning behind this poem, it's different yet very strong and a real eye-opener. Great job, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

:-) Nice poem... perhaps I don't completely agree with the lines "So many people cry over silly little things
A broken relationship, a fallout with a friend" because there are a lot of people that depend emotionally on their relationships and their friends, so in my opinion losing that is a cry-worthy event. But apart from that I thought that you had a marvelous point :-D

//T.L.//

Hey Great Poem...it sort of makes you reflect a lil bit. and thankyou for the comment it really meant a lot to me