Very nice poem. I like the way you made it flow, its choppy, but it adds to the message conveyed through your words. Best wishes, and blessed be. *5/5

I can really relate to this poem,i love it
auna

Wow i mean WOW"""""" This is so good. the pefect title to me, just me,
would had been OUTKAST like i said
thats me. don't do anything ur poem
is the best. 5/.5 only because thats
the highest i can rate on this site.
Its starang how any member of the
family can be that outcast. IM the
dad of two teenage girls and because
im a addict that makes the weakest
link of the chain. Don;t get wrong
i still do my daddy job and love it but
it always goes back to outcast when
ever i get into la la land as my wife and kids call it. so i hide in my room
like a outcast. you get the point.
thanks for the poem, its one i'll
always read over and over.

This poem is so amazing.. the way u put together these words and make them sound so realistic... it's so original.

I told i would read it over and over
i relate to this poem so bad
i wanted to writea poem just like
this but i don't have to now. every
word is me. Its a small world.

Again i got to say thanks. Thanks for putting the right words down.
its like listening to a staind song.
every word is me. how can two
people who with diffent lives ,diffent
ages have the same problem.Its a
small world. i won't have to read this any more i have memorize it.
thanks cy

Cy suggested i read this. he has very good taste in poetry. great job here. such a feeling of 'alone' in this poem. i am the black sheep in my family. always have been. i can relate so very well to this! 5 for you!

Iread your quotes and they made me
feel so bad for you. i wish i could
find a way to snap you out of this
state of mind you are trap in. I DO
know this you have to find your way
as do i . drugs are not working
anymore, im sober right now and my
daugter in the other room and i feel
so ashame to be around her. Every
time i open my mouth the wrong
words come out. I JUST WANT TO HUG her and tell her how much i miss
her while i still have a piece of my brain left. my wife i think has had
enoght. i don;t mean to dump this
on you i do it to warn you of the
future. im in your future. a future of
self hate , low self esteem, no self respect, im drowing in the same self
pity pool ur in. reach for life befor
its too late. I THINK if thiers a god
and you take your life he makes you do it all over again until you get it
right. so find a way, your way. Im
looking every day at your page
hopeing for that poem where every
thing starting to get better. its in
you i can read it in your poems its
between the lines of ur poems
I feel what you write so write some
thing that can help us
cy

Don't forget my words. you only know
the part of me i share. so i say again don't forget me if u find a way back.
Back to a better time. A time where
life had meaning. where i stool 10
feet tall to my wife. where just making it through the night without
drugs was'nt a struggle. BACK to a time where theses words would make
no sence to me. DON'T FORGET

Still reading this one. no one has come close to this poem and one
called ALMOST by gracie danelle
you two are tie at my favorite poets and poems check out her poem
i know you'll like it
cy

Hey there, ADDICT recommended your poems to me. This is by far one of the best poems I have read just because I know what its like. I go through every day as an outcast and I relate to you. Way to go, Love it and hate it at the same time, a poem so great and a life so nasty.

Hey there, ADDICT recommended your poems to me. This is by far one of the best poems I have read just because I know what its like. I go through every day as an outcast and I relate to you. Way to go, Love it and hate it at the same time, a poem so great and a life so nasty.

Im sending you a fan club.

Im reading it again its my favorite poem EVER. THE poem that comes
close is a poem called ALMOST
by gracie Danielle check it out
i relate to her poem like i do this one
but your poem will always be #1
your fan cy gindle

Im doing good i got 2 weeks coke
free. its hell cause i crave it so badddd
but im staying clean. I USE TO BE UP STAIRS ABOUT THIS TIME listening to
the togeterness and fun downstairs
but right now im playing scrabble
with my family and im part of the
laughter and fun. ITS cool being
part of them and not a outcast
I HOPE THIS MAKES YOU happy
cause i really could'nt wait to share this with you cy

Check out my new one

I know this is going sound stupid but i feel bad feeling good without everybody doing good. cy

I for one definitely know a thing or two about being an outcast. 5/5

This poem is really good

I never get tiered of reading this poem
it will be my favorite piece foever
thanks cy