Cold

by Chancey   Dec 13, 2006


Cold(a poem)

Cold,Oh So Very Cold
I Can See Her Breath Escaping
I Can Feal her Heart Go So Cold,So Lifeless
As her eyes close
i can feal the cold
the coldness in my heart
like a chunk has frozen over
I try to stand but fall to my knees
as my tears reach my cheek i feal them freeze
I'm Cold,So Very Cold

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  • 17 years ago

    by Amberinaa

    Wow.
    I loved it.
    Amazing i don't even no what to say.
    the tears freezing on your cheeks.
    amazing line. alot of amazing lines.
    Good job
    XD
    -Amberinaa*
    xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by KelseyinWonderland

    Good work. Keep it up.

    ~K3!$3Y~

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