Wow love the repition and what a risk with the new style but i really enoyed it keep it up!

lissa

Great poem joe, it has a great flow and reminds me of a poetry style that i once seen, 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

Woo woo! I love this last line: 'So stay by my side as you kiss me while we both undress and caress as we make progress in our romance.' That is nicely worded ;)