Comments : A Pretty Face Beside The Pain

  • 17 years ago

    by KelseyinWonderland

    Great poem. I feel that way sometimes too. I am sure many people do. Keep up the good work.

    ~K3!$3Y~

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Excellent rhythm.. You kept it steady throughout the poem and the words don't sound forced at all.
    Very emotive.
    Brill!
    5/5
    *Gem*
    (I added you on myspace =)