by Vannah Dec 13, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
best friends
When I cry you help me out |
by Colby
Good job, one thing, try to make your poems rymth more, people tend to like them more when you do |
by Joshua
Pretty good but not a very large vocabulary of words, and alot of repeating but i guess thats the type of poem it is. |
by Bob
IT WAS WONDERFUL!! LOVED IT!! |