Romance Is The Very Essence Of Life (Paradelle)

by Italian Stallion   Dec 13, 2006


Romance is the very essence of life
Romance is the very essence of life
Without it the world would go insane
Without it the world would go insane
Life without romance would be insane
For it's of essence in this very world

Such a love that is oh so real
Such a love that is oh so real
Making it feel just so surreal
Making it feel just so surreal
Is this love real or surreal
Well I feel we are making it oh so real

Feeling your warmth by my side
Feeling your warmth by my side
And the soft tender touch of your lips
And the soft tender touch of your lips
Feeling the warmth of your lips as they touch mine
While you lay your soft tender body by my side

Your love for me is it real or surreal?
This feeling is making me go insane
Without the warmth of your soft tender kiss
Without the extra essence you provide
My world would be deprived
Of the romance I once had

© Copyright 2006 By: Italian Stallion

~Written for a contest~

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The Paradelle is a modern poetic form invented by Billy Collins as a parody of the villanelle.
Billy Collins claimed that the paradelle was a difficult, fixed form consisting of four six-line
stanzas with a repetitive pattern invented in eleventh century France, and the press believed
the story and ran with it. Due to the extensive publicity, the Paradelle has made its rounds
in the poetic community. Eventhough the form was invented as a hoax, the Paradelle has taken
on a life of its own. It is still a difficult form, nonetheless, to practice which can be fun and
rewarding eventhough the inventor may not have intended it to be.

~THE PARADELLE STRUCTURE~

First Three Stanzas:

The first two lines as well as the third and fourth lines of the first three stanzas must be the same
(repeat). Where it begins to get difficult and become more of a poetic puzzle is when reaching
fifth and sixth lines. These lines must contain all the words from the preceding four lines within
the stanza using them only once to form completely new lines.

Last Stanza:

For the most difficult piece of this poetic puzzle, the final stanza of the paradelle does not repeat like
the preceding stanzas, rather the final six lines must contain every word from the first three stanzas,
and only those words, again using them only once to form completely new lines.

The Design is simple:

Stanza 1: 1, 1, 2, 2, 3, 4
Stanza 2: 5, 5, 6, 6, 7, 8
Stanza 3: 9, 9, 10, 10, 11, 12
Stanza 4: 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18
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  • 17 years ago

    by silvershoes

    I hope this poem won the contest. Great write. The whole idea is kind of like a dream. 'Romance is the very essence of life, without it the world would go insane'...good topic to choose for this style poem...the repitition goes well with the feeling of insanity. Reading it almost makes me feel dizzy, like the images are swirling around me. Haha, ok. But seriously, this is an incredibly well-written piece. I wouldn't change a word.

  • 17 years ago

    by Deana

    I would be totally lost in this but you did great ,and it still held meaning . great job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Shad0w0faPh30n1x

    This is a good paradelle joe, 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

    Bryan,

  • 17 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Very nice!!!

    God bless u