Very nice!!!

God bless u

This is a good paradelle joe, 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

Bryan,

I would be totally lost in this but you did great ,and it still held meaning . great job.

I hope this poem won the contest. Great write. The whole idea is kind of like a dream. 'Romance is the very essence of life, without it the world would go insane'...good topic to choose for this style poem...the repitition goes well with the feeling of insanity. Reading it almost makes me feel dizzy, like the images are swirling around me. Haha, ok. But seriously, this is an incredibly well-written piece. I wouldn't change a word.