by Tragic Misery Dec 13, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Passed the boiling point years ago |
by Freddie
Wow! thats so cool! I luved it! ur a gr4eat writa keep it up! |
by Allison
I liked it, but there is only one thing that I think should be changed. The third line from the last should say 'feel' instead of 'fell'. *5/5* |
I love it. even the title is catchy, nice words you use. Good poem |
I love it. even the title is catchy, nice words you use. Good poem |
by Bryan
Pretty good poem, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!! |