This is a great poem! Your rhyming was amazing! I loved your title and how you put that in the poem. You did a great job on this one. I think the only thing you can do is structure and grammer:

In the beginning of every line the first letter is capitalized. Just add some commas and periods too.

Example:

I must shield my heart,
From evil.
Stealing away the pain.
But because I fell no hurt,
I'll have no joy.
Protection is a
Double Edged Sword.

I think it's always best to capitilize your title if you have it in your poem. It adds Emphasis.

Amazing Job!

5/5

Pretty good poem, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

I love it. even the title is catchy, nice words you use. Good poem
5/5
~Stevie

I love it. even the title is catchy, nice words you use. Good poem
5/5
~Stevie

I liked it, but there is only one thing that I think should be changed. The third line from the last should say 'feel' instead of 'fell'. *5/5*

Alyson

Wow! thats so cool! I luved it! ur a gr4eat writa keep it up!