She thought her life was perfect.........

by Linzii   Dec 13, 2006


The girl thought she had everything
She never dream-pt she would soon have scars to hide
She thought her life was perfect and no one ever lied
She never thought she would become a person to hide from the world
She never thought she would have stains that clung to her arms
She never thought she'd hold a blade to her wrist and watch the crimson spill from within
The girl everyone thought they knew really didn't have a clue
She was hiding from the world
The millions of scars she hid didn't have tie
Little did she know she would one day die
Running with the blade slipped and fell cut to deep leaving that one deadly streak

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gracie Danielle

    Its good. I like it a lot. i know how that all goes.

  • 17 years ago

    by Freddie

    Wow! thats so cool! I luved it!

  • 17 years ago

    by AliveAndEmpty

    I realy like it. When I said what I did before, it didn't come out how I meant it too. Sorry about that. Anyway, I can really relate to this. Its really good.

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Intense is right.
    I can relate to this, it's sad to say I can. Embarrasing to be able to relate, I hate cutting yet I don't want to stop at the same time and I have yet to understand that.

    Anyway, this poem was very good! I love how you ended it and it's true cutters are always who you expect. Wonderful job, keep it up! 5/5

    Stephanie

  • 17 years ago

    by A New Beginning

    Great job. Good emotion. and nice way to end.

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