Comments : My Heavenly Lullaby

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "My heavenly lullaby,
    I think of you on
    two occasions,
    day and night."

    Just beautiful. The whole poem was gorgeous and the language you use is almost magical, it flows so fluidly.
    Excellent write
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Another beautifully penned poem. Great job! 5/5