by Roy Dec 14, 2006
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
High in the sky, on top of a cloud |
by x.Athame.x
A very nice write. The descriptive words really add to this piece, making it a powerful poem. I love the concept, and how you conveyed this message through your words. I think that you need to get a more consistent rhyme scheme, however, it would really add to this write. I liked these lines, |