Thank you all for your comments. My daughter is really feeling good about her poem now. Yes I am very proud of her. I am waiting for her permission to submit the other poem she has written. She has a great view on life and I know I will only become more and more proud as every day passes.

that is amazing she is really gifted

we have found a lil *STAR* well dun u r a really good writter keep pratiseing and you'll get better and better this poem is beautiful well done. luv jodes :)