by Landi Cordier Dec 14, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
You cleared my mind, |
by Rachel RTVW
*Again the flow and rhyme scheme need work but I especially like this stanza: |
* 5/5. AMAZING! And such a great poem with feelings and hidingness. |
* i like this poem aLOT! great job! |
by steve
It flowed fantastic and the rhyming was perfect,ive been in a similar situation but i was the older man....ur 18 so whats age matter??? |