This was really good, I love the imagery, very nice

This one was actually pretty good.. I didn't force myself to read it. But you really need to work on flow. Good work other than that.

I enjoyed this.
I thought the imagery was a joy to read.
The flow threw me off at times again, but apart from that, I liked this very much.

This is my favorite of your poems. This is free verse and you don't go back and forth between rhyming and not rhyming. Even though the meters aren't equal the beautiful message makes up for it. Great job!

I love how you put this poem together. it was lovely. the ending was my favorite part of it! 5/5