Gem, that is such a beautiful poem. I truely love the message within it. There are so many people that need to read this. It is a wonderful piece and i love the ending. Such a true meaning. 5/5 without a doubt!

Kelly
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Very strong message & i do hope this one goes on the top page like ur other poems so that more & more people could read it & realize the fact...its not just the face that distinguish between beautiful & ugly...but heart & soul.

lovely write

all the best and take care

Hey darl there is alot of meaning behind this poem. its very well written. good job keep it up xx

Gem, this is a great poem! The words flow nicely and boy, is it true! I love it!
Beautiful topic to write about!
xoxo

Wonderful poem. I marvel at how someone so young can have such a natural talent! Great job!

Very nicely done. A powerful topic and great phrasing.

I think we can all learn alot fromthat poem, it relates to everyone in sum way or another. excellently spoken...nice job

lissa

Ok, this was much better than the other one you did like this. This one had a deeper feel to it. And I finally got mine done too, which you commented on. It's funny how beautiful makeup can make you feel when it's on and how ashamed, or at least awkward when it's off. But it should be the reversal, all though nothing is wrong with makeup we should be sure it's not our crutch! That it's nice to wear it out, but that we should keep our confidence no matter what!
Good job! I'm not sure I've blabbered this much on one of your poems before. And it's nice to see you do stuff other than love poems, though you are really good at em. I broke free of it too!
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Charisma*

You girls may think what you want but if the guy really loves you then to him you can be coverd head to toe in mud and he'll still be the proudest man alive to hold your hand in public :)) face it you may think you're not perfect but to us perfection is you :)) another great poem :))

Yeah it sucks people try to judge u on how u look,but unfortunatley thats how people are.apparently they dont realize their rude.or they just dont care.but we all need to love ourselves.no matter what.besides not all people are smart.

Awesome word usage. great write.