Wow, this poem is beautifully written, it really paints a scene, so full of emotion!!!!
The vice kills the sun,
on twilight's shadow it feeds.
Fall into despair,
paper dancer bleeds.
Morbid.
Surreal.
That is just so beautiful. Amazing!!
Keep up the awesome work, I'm waiting for another awesome poem!!!
Thanx for the comment, it means a lot!
Much Love,
~*Danielle*~