Short but to the point- i like the repetion of i'm losing you, adds to the helplessness!!!!!!!! Good poem! |
by Jenni Marie
I liked this. |
* try seperating your poem like this |
* 5/5. Good poem. Short, but felt alot of emotions! Keep up the good work! |
by Rachel RTVW
Still need some work with flow and rhyme schemes but the message is filled with emotion. Nice job! |