Love

by SherryAmpz   Dec 14, 2006


Love: The one you love is just like a bird. He will just land on your shoulder which means he likes you. Only you say, he is for you.

Like a bird, love can leave you in a single second. The moment you neglect him, he will surely fly away --- and look for another place. Like a bird, love should be held just right; not too loose -- not too tight; hold him just enough -- to feel the warmth and security...

Love: Like a bird who seeks the partner with whom he could give his trust; for birds fine comfort, security and warmth with others of their kind. Like love, a bird is a nomad --- to find a place where he could find peace... to where he could lay his wings...

Love: Like a bird, comes back to a place he could not forget... a place full of memories for him...

First Love: Is like a bird who is just learning to fly. A baby bird who easily gets hurt. One who is so sensitive. Not so strong enough to stand, to fly on its own --- like a baby bird, love should be gently taken care of...

Love: Like a bird should not be placed in a cage. Even if it is made of gold. No matter how strong the cage is built, he'll try and try to free himself...

Too much warmth can cause his death while being too loose will let him fly... Far away from you...

Love: Is being open to one another; like a homey bird --- love will come back. It'll take him out but will surely come back where it started. The more you give love, the more you feel it. The more you express it, the more you enjoy it. But, like a bird...

Love: Could also die...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Poetical Princess

    Wow X) this poem is REALLY good. I like how you used a bird referring to love. Keep writing ;) excellent poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sammib

    Well this certainly is an interesting piece. What I felt about it is that it lacked emotion. Your feelings didn't leap at me. Although you can see you have a knack for writing, make sure it comes from your heart...it interests your reader more. You have good comparisons, and a good idea for structure, its unique. Alot of thought went into this poem, just not enough emotion.. use both and you will be an awesome poet!!

    Godbless
    Sammib

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