IMHO, I didn't care too much for the flow. I like the content, but not the cadence. I think that it takes away from the words and feelings you have put into this piece. Overall, however, I do believe its a nice piece with a good bit of emotion. I particularly loved these lines,

"You’ve been gone
I’ve been here
You’ve found love
I’ve found tears"

Simple, but a lot of meaning, with a nice flow and rhyme. The flow off the tounge nicely. *4/5 Best wishes, and blessed be.