Smudging Ink [Collaboration]

by Jessica   Dec 14, 2006


Smudging ink and flooding words,
Painstakingly written across a page,
Hidden text reveals forgotten hope,
Silently trapped by her eternal rage..

Devotedly writing until soft hands ache,
Pouring out feeling in perfect rhyme,
Tears plunge onto a lake of emotion,
Gradually drowning her soul over time..

Spilling her tortured secrets onto pale paper,
Black stains release what she feels inside,
Plummeting into a sea of her scarred past,
Hoping her feelings will somehow subside..

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A collaboration, written by scarlet.lips ♥ && ♥JeSS♥ ~Beautiful Mistake~

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  • 16 years ago

    by ether

    I love us.
    I miss the SMWACE site domination. We totally ruled this site.

    <3

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    And AGAIN.. another awesome poem!! You're really talented! this is a great poem! I enjoyed reading this :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    You girls did an amazing job.
    I loved it. :]
    It was another great poem.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Wow, the flow in this was perfect. The words just seemed to come so easily for both of you: excellent collaboration. I enjoyed reading it.

    My favourite stanza was this:

    "Devotedly writing until soft hands ache,
    Pouring out feeling in perfect rhyme,
    Tears plunge onto a lake of emotion,
    Gradually drowning her soul over time.."

    Simply beautiful.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Beautiful! This is so amazing. It just flows so well and the feelings that come from the poem are wonderful! 5/5

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