Comments : Dusty Clothes and Loving Prose

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "Holding me in your arms when darkness comes
    Enveloping me in a blanket of love and kisses
    Finding that the lord has granted my wishes"

    Such a beautiful ending to a beautiful poem...
    Your language is amazing in this, so detailed, you can almost see whats going on..
    Fabulous write..
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Absolutely beautiful tribute to true love! Very vivid and intense. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jason

    Love is a powerful thing and write about it so elequently.

  • 17 years ago

    by Deana

    I love the feeling this gives it was like a quiet acceptance , wondreful.

  • 17 years ago

    by hani

    Very nice and beautiful