..... it's pretty.. but I want you to be happy..

He has to laugh, you're right. But let him write, then he will stay with us ;)

This was a good poem!
=-)
Great job
5/5

Great work, It painted a great image in my head with the train being the 'light at the end of the tunnel'.
I enjoyed reading this, keep up the good work.

Darkest Wishes,
GA

Well what can i say... well maby my poem reflects you i dont know im guessing im trying to say that ur a great poet and i know EXACTLY what you mean i have a poem (too much bad language to post it) that prety much goes with that great one john ;)

This is really good.
i really like it