by The Angel of Secrets Dec 14, 2006
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
You taught the sun to shine, |
Again another refreshing poem the repition makes this work well :D xxx alex xxx |
This is a really good poem but I think you used to many ' He Taught ' lines. 5/5 tho. |
by Kalgalath
This poem is so true about some people. i really like it. the flow is perfect. |