Comments : I'm Strong

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "For I've battled my fears
    And I won the final war.
    Now I'll help others
    Like I was helped before."

    Wonderful ending stanza, this whole poem has a note of braveness to it. And it's true about the news, they always seem to show whats wrong with the world, never whats write and they always show one right before i go to bed so i have nightmares! lol
    Great rhythm on this one, i liked it.
    5/5
    *Gem*
    (And of course i'll submit a new one, just let me sift through what i've got, lol)