Your Love Seems To Be In Short Supply.

by ALEX   Dec 14, 2006


You told her you loved her.
She believed it, you know.
Thought you saw something special.
In her mind? In her soul?

And you're still a good guy,
But you did break her heart.
It wasn't too careful,
Playing darts in the dark.

But what do you care?
You didn't get hurt.
Guess three months was your limit,
Then her love was cut short.

The transformation began.
She wanted you back.
Tried so hard to make up
For the things that she lacked.

She's changing so fast.
One short summer, it took.
So pretty now.
Do you like how she looks?

So half a year later,
You're out with your friends.
And a beautiful girl asks you,
"Hi, how's it been?"

You don't know who she is,
But you answer, "It's been fine."
And she knows what you're thinking,
Deep down in your mind.

A quick little smile, then
She's gone, just like that.
The guys all applaud you.
A pat on the back.

Realization sets in.
Can't believe your own eyes.
Your mind flashes back
To your final goodbyes.

What a thoughtless mistake.
You left her in tears.
No comforting words from you
Ever reached her ears.

So here's to the guys
Who give up based on looks.
You don't mean a thing,
Just another page in the book.

12/14/06

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  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    I like this poem. I like the fact that in the end the girl looks how the guy would like her to but she doesn't want him anymore. Beauty is only skin deep. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Ugh. i hate thouse guys who are like that. their lies, drive me crazy. and sometimes you cant tell who they are. 5/5 i loved it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Deana

    I liked it a lot, I too hate shallowness in a person. It is so rare and beautiful to find a person who is for real. all the way to the heart. good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I really like the theme of this poem because I do believe it is shallow to only look at the surface. My favorite line is "Playing darts in the dark" I was always told if I was interested in finding a companion to find someone that loves me for me. It is painful when you think someone has discovered you only to find out they are shallow

  • 17 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    I want to say wow, Its a great poem.

    Laurie