Just another ex.

by Breeanna   Dec 14, 2006


"Too long of a wait,"
you said, my heart was being shreaded.

Falling, swooping, gliding into that Deep dark hole. My heart yearns.

Oh how i wish i could have you back
I would have said yes. Its too late Now, but will you say different later?

She doesn't deserve you, that nameless face that I see you with.
She doesnt know you like i do.

My best friend is another exlover.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I thought that you could add more into this, to give it more depth and meaning.
    I enjoyed the wording used, but the structure threw me a little.
    Apart from that, I think you did a good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by lexie

    I think this was really good,i can relate.
    raelly good write.=]
    --lexie

    p.s. thanks for joining the fiesta!

  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    It's an ok poem. Not the best i've ever read. It needs more... flow...

    Good job though.
    4/5
    ~Stevie

  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    It's an ok poem. Not the best i've ever read. It needs more... flow...

    Good job though.
    4/5
    ~Stevie

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Really sad. Great unique poem.
    You might want to organize your poems alittle bit more just to make it flow. Overall it was wonderful.
    God Bless 5/5

    ~*Tay*~

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