Separated souls separated worlds

by mathiax   Dec 14, 2006


Separated souls
looking for each other
searching for one another
checking if the other lives in truth or in memory
separated souls
wondering about
different from one another
but still incomplete
begging the other to finally make them whole
separated souls from separated worlds
totally different
with different rules
different ways
different commands
and different actions
different in all its essence
but still they want each other
to full fill the other
to make them one
so that they could finally be someone
and know the true meaning of ecstasy

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  • 17 years ago

    by Boogie

    Lol yeah !!! AND U BETTER SHOW ME THE PIC !!! wanna know how the idea came into ur head !!! :p

    and honey u know im alwayz here to rate and comment ur poems ! ;)

  • 17 years ago

    by mathiax

    Thnx!!!!!!! actually its all thnx to this pic that i saw ^_^!! but yah my imagenation did kick in after i saw it.....loooooooooooooool!!!!! good to know that i have one instead of having none =p.....love ya bi and thnx again for your comment!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Boogie

    Hehe.. cute! and in a way funny too..
    seperated souls?! id never think of writting about that.. how did it come into ur mind?! .. i guess its ur imagination again ! ANYWAYZ! its amazing hun! great one !!

    5/5 again ! ;)

  • 17 years ago

    by mathiax

    Thnx stevie!!! i saw this pic that was separated in the middle showing to different sides of the pic....it was amazing and thats what inspired me to write this poem...im glad you loved it!!!XD!!! hope to hear from you soon!! take care!

  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Great poem
    I love it... the, vague sensuality that is hinted towards.
    Beautiful poem... nice, original idea
    5/5
    ~Stevie

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