Great poem
I love it... the, vague sensuality that is hinted towards.
Beautiful poem... nice, original idea
5/5
~Stevie

Thnx stevie!!! i saw this pic that was separated in the middle showing to different sides of the pic....it was amazing and thats what inspired me to write this poem...im glad you loved it!!!XD!!! hope to hear from you soon!! take care!

Hehe.. cute! and in a way funny too..
seperated souls?! id never think of writting about that.. how did it come into ur mind?! .. i guess its ur imagination again ! ANYWAYZ! its amazing hun! great one !!

5/5 again ! ;)

Thnx!!!!!!! actually its all thnx to this pic that i saw ^_^!! but yah my imagenation did kick in after i saw it.....loooooooooooooool!!!!! good to know that i have one instead of having none =p.....love ya bi and thnx again for your comment!!

Lol yeah !!! AND U BETTER SHOW ME THE PIC !!! wanna know how the idea came into ur head !!! :p

and honey u know im alwayz here to rate and comment ur poems ! ;)