Thank you for the opinion, i will listen to what you say. ^_^

Hey i really liked this one...it shows that you really love this guy eh? how cute well hope you and him make it through! also thanx for your comments .:*.

Wow this poem is good because it says what everyone in love feels. i like it alot and i can tell that whoever you wrote this for is someone special to you or you want him to be good job girl

Wow this is awesome i was in a different world when i was reading this its soo good i love it good job i think u did a very good job on it

keenan

Well done! i luvd it! 5/5!

This is beautiful. 5/5

"I look up at the sky,
and I see your smile in the clouds.
I look at the stars shining so
bright,
and I know you're more than
a beautiful sight;
it must
be you."

I can definitly relate to that stanza, the whole poem..
Excellent work
5/5
*Gem*