WOW!! damn u got me missing my ex!!!

loved this part-> To feel your fingers trace over my
body.

amazing!! 5/5 ! ;)

Dying to love you wow thats sums it up
this is really well written very emtional
piece 5/5

Wow! that is all I can say. when you love someone so much you will do anything for them. You did a great job expressing two people in love. I love the passion and emotion of this poem 5/5

Very splendid poem. As I finished reading this, I got the feeling this poem is much similar to mine romantic poems. Even the writing technique is also similar.

The thinking is good, the way you expressed here. You have filled this write with intense love and care. But I guess this poem could have been written in much better way. Just a simple suggestion to you.

These both lines are truly amazing:

Letting all of my worries and shyness go.
To pour out my love, with an unending flow.

Overall well done! As I said this poem is good but not good enough...so 4/5.