by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex Dec 15, 2006
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Answer the last two questions... I'm curious to see what everyone perceives. |
by Bridget
Wow this poem really made me think.. I'm still trying to think what those words were are whom they belonged to. Great imagery in there, you could maybe even use more. But i loved it, it was something different. 5/5 :) |
I believe these words, or how I relate to them as being, are words that I always find sitting beside me appearing without thinking of them or being aware of them, and hearing them through my without having to actually think about what is being written. |
Oh btw look back at the free comments post, I wrote something to you about your last post: |
This poem really makes you think. I think the words are asking me to dance with death. I have no idea! What do they say to you. The words belong to those who are losing their minds, they are dancing with fate now. You described everything really great. You did an awesome job on this. |
Wow. Intricate, a delicate and unique style. I like your word use, and i like the formation of your lines/sentences. Great write. Very cute. |