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Exellent,
your chrismas memories brought back my own personal memories and some tear drops. it is strange how we remember those moments as they seem so far away, but yet
we have hope for a happey tommorow
even when today we live through pain.

greatly written like always and a 5/5 from me.

I really like the flow, the transitions were really good. i like the message of the poem and how you told it. great work, keep it up. 5/5

She tells the great Lord
to keep her classified in his head.

I love that line(: This brought back some memorieees` . This was nicely written` . The flow was good and just overall -- Fantastic . Another great poem from yu[:
..__MiNDYY

Wow.
So many emotions portrayed in this one that brought back some memories for me.
Your flow was perfect and the meaning of it was great. Keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

Wow, another wonderful poem. I really loved it. Your flow was awesome. Great Job on looking back on Christmas. I really enjoied it.

Peace, Joe

Christmas can be a very sad time for those who are apart from their loved ones, whether by choice or by death or break-up. Beautidul poem.

This is so sad. I love it. You are amazing!

Aww honey that was so beautiful! i know exactly what you're thinking, it's so heartfelt, and so beautifully written too. wonderful flow and great vocab and wording, i really loved it. hopefully your prayers will be answered and you'll get your christmas wish!! 5/5

Well, this is a very good poem, i loved the flow, i give this poem a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

Great poem, really good use of words, really good flow and structure, looking forward to reading more of yours... great work, keep it up *5/5

Awwwww thats so beautiful! i love it!!! 5/5 great flow, great rhyme, great story, amazing job hun, keep up the great work!
xx love