Darkness..

by w!th0utyou   Dec 15, 2006


Consiquences can be deadly
you left me lonely; feeling guilty
no matter how hard i tried
i had a feeling wanting to die

heavy weights on my shoulders
guiltiness in my eyes
hoplessness in my cries.

nothing you can say or do
you had your chance i did too
run from the darkness
and cries for help

heavy weights on my shoulders
guiltiness in my eyes
hoplessness in my cries

you look into the mirror
you ask why is everything going wrong?
and in your eyes you see my fears
you see me laying slowly descending.

far far away on an island of doom
i slowly die
while in your room
you begin to cry

engulfed in hate
there's no fate
you see nothing but darkness

I told you to run
run as fast as you could
that once you were trapped
there is no going back

now you are consumed in darkness
filled with saddness and sorrow
hardly sleeping at night
you never see the light.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I liked this.
    I thought the flow was jumpy at times, but I loved the wording and imagery you used in this.
    I think you did a wonderful job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Good job on the writing! you can feel the emotions in your words!

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